What to say about my first essay? I think I would have to use the word challenging for my description. In the beginning of the first draft I was confused on what to write about but I kind of swerved myself into the loop by asking questions and learning the details that mattered.
Most others said that finding a blog that was suitable for their topic was difficult, I however found something pretty quickly, and I am thankful for that.
Though after my essay was formed, I kept looking back to decide if the things were really what I wanted to be talking about. And they weren't. Changes were made and challenges were overcome for me mainly by just exploring the essay itself and the blog I was researching. Without that I wouldn't have had the feedback that came from others, which really was only to reword the thesis and switch around the paragraphs.
Overall, I think that I did pretty well and I am proud of the outcome of my essay titled, "Travel through Identity".
Clever title ;]
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