In the current book I am reading, "They Say I Say" by Gerald Graff and Cathy Berkenstein I am given information on how to revise and edit my essays. It helps me in the first few chapters to be able to know what points I want to prove and allow others to give me criticism for improvement; not meaning I won't alter my writing but rather that I won't change my main ideas.
Though, the book also helps me with using quotations and connection. I will use this to be able to show the readers or the audience about my writer of the blog, as well as, being able to add fluency to the body of my essay.
Picking out main ideas is a big part of writing and important to include. It seems that you are on track with your writing! Make sure you really elaborate on your thesis when it comes down to it. Good work! :)
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