Thursday, October 28, 2010
Strengthening my Essay
After my presentation today I took into consideration what Professor Thompson had said, which was to try to give a definition of identity in my thesis. I believe that it will help also for others to understand. Maybe I should incorporate more examples also, but mainly connect with my thesis being how he connects with the readers and others as well as what identity truly is, not just my perception of it. Detail would be helpful, but it all has to start with coordinating my current thesis with a newer one that I will work on; connecting it with my paper and everything I want it to show. That's all for today, and at least the presentation is over! Until next time. -CE
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I definitely agree that you should write more on how Chris Adams connects with his readers. I remember we talked about how his goal in travel seemed to be connecting to different peoples and places and cultures so maybe you could bring that up as well-- that he wants to be in connection with everything and everyone! I'm really looking forward to seeing your finished product and you've done a great job so far! :)
ReplyDeleteFunny, but I wrote the exact same thing about how to improve. Maybe I said that after your presentation already? ;) I look forward to seeing how you refocus your thesis! :)
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